Giraffes Can’t Dance! (But they CAN Help Explain 5-Part Plot Structure.)

Giraffe in front of a roller coaster

Here is a basic explanation of plot structure—sometimes also called the “plot roller coaster.” Similar to what you’ll hear in any high school language arts class. Examples of each plot point come from the adorable kids’ book Giraffes Can’t Dance, by Giles Andreae and Guy Parker-Rees. The appeal of this book for kids is obvious, but I have also found it helpful in explaining plot structure in high school and adult creative writing classes.

What is a writer’s job in the exposition of a story?

  • Establish character
  • Establish setting
  • Establish situation – what is the routine the main character is used to?
  • The exposition ends with an inciting incident that breaks up the routine and sets the main character on a quest. According to young author Lauren Oliver, the inciting incident can be luck, but all other steps must be character’s own decisions.

What happens during the rising action of the story?

  • The plot thickens… the roller coaster climbs… pick your plot-related cliché.
  • This is the longest part of the story—there are usually at least three events or decisions, each of which raise the stakes higher.
  • All steps must be the character’s own decisions. Often, characters’ efforts to get out of trouble can get them deeper into trouble, turning the tension screws, and raising the stakes.

What happens during the climax of a story?

  • The climax is the emotional high point of the story.
  • According to young adult author, Lauren Oliver, the climax is the utter failure and epic collapse of the original thing the main character wants…

What happens during the falling action of a story?

  • Things “fall” into place. Misunderstandings are cleared up. The real bad guy is revealed, found, and taken down. The real biological mother is revealed, found, and reunited.
  • As an author, you can think of this as a time to fulfill the promises you’ve made to readers, close all the doors you’ve opened, answer the questions you’ve raised in readers’ minds. If a cat runs away early in the story and the main character searches for it, we should find out what happened to the cat.
  • According to Lauren Oliver… in the process of failing at what they want, the character finds out what they need.

What is the author’s job in the resolution of a story?

  • Tie up any last loose ends. Let readers know the main character’s new “normal.
  • End the story before the reader loses interest. The resolution of a story is usually short.

You’ve also probably seen a version of this diagram, which illustrates the five-part plot structure above

Plot Roller Coaster
Image credit: National Novel Writing Month Young Writers Program

Here’s how Giraffes Can’t Dance, by Giles Andreae and Guy Parker-Rees, breaks down into five-part plot structure

Warning: This summary contains spoilers. You’ll have to stop reading now if you want to find out yourself whether Gerald the Giraffe learns to dance by the end of the story.

You can use this read-aloud video of Giraffes Can’t Dance to familiarize yourself or your students with the story.

Exposition in Giraffes Can’t Dance

Main character: Gerald the Giraffe
Setting: Jungle
Situation the main character is used to: being clumsy and awkward. Gerald can barely walk without tripping! He certainly can’t dance, right?
Inciting incident: The Jungle Dance. Gerald is going to have to leave his comfort zone of “standing still and munching shoots off trees.”

Rising Action in Giraffes Can’t Dance

All the other animals are great dancers. One by one we see that they each have a cool dance they can do at the Jungle Dance. Pretty soon it’s going to be Gerald’s turn. Uh oh!

Climax of Giraffes Can’t Dance

Gerald tries to dance but the lions “saw him coming and they soon began to roar.” Gerald gets laughed at, bullied, and called “so weird.” Then, saddest of all, he has to walk home alone while all the other jungle animals do a conga line without him. So, so sad!

Falling action in Giraffes Can’t Dance

A cricket who’s been watching shows Gerald that he actually can dance. He just needs his own music. And once he starts breaking it down in that jungle clearing, all the animals who laughed at him earlier show up and start cheering him on.

Resolution of Giraffes Can’t Dance

Gerald finishes with a bow and teaches the other animals (and us) an important lesson.

Plotting can also get more complicated than this. According to author Christopher Booker, there are seven basic plots that most stories follow.

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