Giraffes Can’t Dance! (But they CAN Help Explain 5-Part Plot Structure.)

Giraffe in front of a roller coaster

Here is a basic explanation of plot structure—sometimes also called the “plot roller coaster.” Similar to what you’ll hear in any high school language arts class. Examples of each plot point come from the adorable kids’ book Giraffes Can’t Dance, by Giles Andreae and Guy Parker-Rees. The appeal of this book for kids is obvious, but I have also found it helpful in explaining plot structure in high school and adult creative writing classes.

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The Three Layers of a Complex Character

Here’s a way of thinking about how to build characters. Imagine three layers wrapped around one another like an onion or jawbreaker candy.

As we get to know the character, we get closer to the innermost layer.

As characters grow, they often start to understand their own innermost layer.

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You’ve Heard the Writing Advice “Show Don’t Tell.” What Does it Actually Mean?

You’ve almost definitely heard the writing advice, “show don’t tell.” It’s one of those tidbits passed from writer to writer, and—I’ll own up to this—heavily encouraged by the English teachers of the world. Yet, when you ask people to elaborate, you usually get a similarly vague, often-repeated answer. Add more detail. But, you know, the right details. Sensory details. But also, get to the point and don’t be too wordy. Try to, um… show? Instead of tell?

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